Let’s be real for a second. Writing a speech is exhausting.
You stare at a blank screen. You type a generic opening. You delete it. You worry that your life experience isn’t “epic” enough to hold a room’s attention for seven minutes.
But here is the truth used by screenwriters, tech CEOs, and the best speakers on the TED stage: Structure eats content for breakfast.
You don’t need to survive a bear attack or climb Everest to win a club contest. You just need to frame your normal, everyday struggles effectively.
Enter the Hero’s Journey speech.
Originally identified by mythologist Joseph Campbell, the classic “Monomyth” consists of 17 complex stages. That works great if you are directing The Matrix or writing a 500-page fantasy novel. But for a 5-to-7-minute slot at your next meeting? That is way too much data.
You need the “Lite” version. You need the hack.
Here is how to strip down the Hero’s Journey into a 5-step algorithm that fits perfectly into a standard speaking slot.
Phase 1: The “Before” (Status Quo)
Time allocation: 0:00 – 1:00
Every hero starts in a mundane world. For Neo, it was his computer desk. For you, it might be your chaotic kitchen, your overflowing inbox, or your fear of small talk.
Don’t start with the explosion. Start with the calm before the storm.
To hook your audience, you must paint a vivid picture of who you were before the change happened. Were you oblivious? Arrogant? Anxious?
The Template: “Three years ago, I was a man who thought [Insert Wrong Belief]. I was comfortable, but I was stagnant.”
Phase 2: The Catalyst (Inciting Incident)
Time allocation: 1:00 – 2:00
Something has to happen to crash your system. In storytelling terms, this is the “Call to Adventure.”
This doesn’t have to be a burning bush. It acts better if it’s relatable. It could be a subtle comment from a mentor, a humiliating mistake at work, or a realization that you’ve hit rock bottom. This is the moment you realized the “Before” world was no longer sustainable.
The Template: “Then, [The Incident] happened. It wasn’t a huge moment for the world, but for me, it changed everything.”
Phase 3: The Abyss (The Struggle)
Time allocation: 2:00 – 4:30
This is the most critical part of your Hero’s Journey speech. This is where you enter the unknown. You try, you fail, you try again, and you fail harder.
In a short speech, many speakers rush this part. They skip straight to the success. They say, “I decided to run a marathon, and then I finished it.”
Boring.
We want to see the glitch. We want to hear about the blisters, the doubts, and the moment you wanted to quit. Spend about 40% of your time here. Perfection isolates your audience; struggle connects them to you.
🚀 Pro Tip: Don’t Get Red-Lighted
Getting lost in “The Abyss” is the easiest way to blow your time limit. It’s easy to start rambling about the struggle and forget to finish the story.
Use a visual aid to keep yourself on track. My Free Speech Timer runs on any browser and uses high-visibility colors to let you know exactly when to move to the next phase.
Phase 4: The Epiphany (The Shift)
Time allocation: 4:30 – 5:30
The climax of a modern speech isn’t usually when you win the trophy. It is when you understand why the journey mattered.
This is the internal shift. Maybe you finally learned to code that app. But the real victory wasn’t the code; it was realizing that you are capable of learning new things at any age.
The Epiphany connects your specific story (coding) to a universal theme (growth mindset). This is the secret sauce that makes your speech memorable long after the meeting ends.
For a deeper dive on how master storytellers structure these realizations, check out this breakdown of Kurt Vonnegut’s Shapes of Stories.
Phase 5: The “New Normal” (The Return)
Time allocation: 5:30 – 7:00
You return to the ordinary world, but you are upgraded.
Briefly tell us where you are now. Then—and this is vital—turn the focus back to the audience. This is called “The Gift.”
Ask them: “What represents the obstacle in your life right now?”
Challenge them to start their own journey. A speech that ends on you is a performance. A speech that ends on them is a service.
Why This Template Works
This structure works because human brains are hardwired for it. We crave the tension of the struggle and the release of the resolution. It’s the same psychological hook used in everything from ancient myths to modern TED Talks.
By using this simplified Hero’s Journey speech template, you stop rambling. You stop wondering what comes next. You simply fill in the blanks of the framework with your own unique data.
So, for your next slot on the agenda, don’t try to reinvent the wheel. Just walk the path.
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